You calm me down whenever I feel bad
When my eyes are closed
I feel my mind calmed
You're always too soft
Just like a sofa
I imagine things on you
And then sleep on you
You make me comfortable
Not like my studying table
With you, I don't have a secret
About everything I see
I fell in sleep
And dream myself sweep
I fell in my dream
And have a sweet cream
Blair,
ReplyDeleteGood ode! I see that you creatively composed the lines so that they rhymed. Overall, it worked. The last stanza could have been adjusted, but overall, you did a good job!